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Apr. 21st, 2005 @ 09:57 pm The Twilight Zone...
Today was weird for me. I felt as though I never actually went to school at all; as if my recollection of my school day was from somewhere last week or the day before. Anyway, that didn't keep me from getting stuff done.

I wrote a few hundred words, which made me exceedingly happy. I wrote a small section involving my main character and his return to his supposed home. It's supposed to convey a sort of bittersweet belonging that the character feels toward this place; while he feels it is the only place he truly belongs, he understands that this is not his home and that there is much about his past with which he is not aware.

Aside from that, I went to the Dentist and he said I need four widom teeth pulled. OUCH!

We'll see how that goes.
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Apr. 20th, 2005 @ 08:36 pm Yea! Drawings!
Today, I gave my mini presentation to at my team meeting with Mr.s Selvidge and my other team members. It was nice to hear that everyone had something really great and positive to say about my presentation, but I wished I had gotten more constructive feedback, i.e. "Better organization," or, "Try clarifying this or that next time." Oh well. It was still really nice to have so many people speak well of me. It was almost flattering.

Afterward, I took Veronica Cohen home and she kindly invited me in for snacks and the such. Well, one thing led to another and we ended up planning out the basis for the cover sketch she's going to do for Kneomir. I'm going to use it in my presentation, as it will be probably the only artistic adaptation of my characters. I was so thrilled that Veronica's excited to do this for me. I'm going to be really happy to see the finished product, no matter how it truns out. Whatever it might be, I'm just so excited about the concept of art inspired by my book.
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Apr. 19th, 2005 @ 10:30 pm New prespective- Faulkner
Today I signed up for my presentation date in Mrs. Selvidge's room. It was kind of hard to decide which day to go because I want my Dad to be able to go (he is, after all, my community person), so I knew I was best off doing it on an Interact day when he's already planning to be there. At the same time, I wanted to go after prom and wear my Renaissance prom dress to the presentation. Oh well. Life goes on, and you have to have priorities, eh?

I also finished reading William Faulkner's As I Lay Dying today while I was at work. It's by far one of the best books I've ever read, though I didn't like it in the beginning at all. Now, I kind of have a feel for what it's like to write a book that starts off slow and seemingly disjointed, yet bring it all together in a grand finale for the end. That's kind of how I feel about Kneomir. I mean, I know Faulkner's not a fantasy writer, but he helped me to understand that an almost nonsensical style such as mine can work if its maneuvered properly.

Tomorrow's my mini presentation. Let's hope I can keep it under 3 minutes!
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Apr. 14th, 2005 @ 09:40 pm Another day lost
Current Music: Cantiga- La Seste Estampie Real
Well, today has officially passed and I've yet to find anything to show for it. I tried to write. Couldn't do it. I tried to tackle another website page. Couldn't do it. I've run out of initiative, despite never having possessed much in the first place. Overall, I'm thoroughly disappointed in myself, because I've begun to take less and less heed of the fact that the year's almost over and I've accomplished far less than I would have hoped. It's easy to say that I should just start making up for lost time, but if I didn't have the time then, I surely won't have it now. It's really not that bad. If anything, I'm extremely grateful for WISE, because otherwise I would probably be doing nothing for Kneomir. In any case, I'm off to go try and tackle my chapter one last time, and then I'm calling it a night.
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Apr. 13th, 2005 @ 10:48 pm Team Meeting day
Current Music: Cantiga- Star of Munster
Aside from my team meeting today, there isn't much to say about the realm of WISE. I got a lot of really great advice about my presentation, which was really nice. It was fun to hear other people's input about what I should do. Now, I'm looking into sharing the various elements of fantasy and demonstrating how they're represented in my book.

I'm kind of Medievaled out for the night... I just finished making a compilation of Irish Cantiga songs for a friend of mine, and now I'm pretty exhausted.

In other news, there are now 28 members on the mailing list. Unfortunately, very few of them are actually reading any of the actual book that I send out. Luckily for me though, the ones who are are really into it and giving me positive advice and sharing their opinions (yea!). Today I also hooked up with Veronica Cohen about her potentially providing some illustrations for Kneomir. I'd better get cracking on that sometime soon, because I don't want her to have to rush them. I'm so excited.

Fare thee well.
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Apr. 11th, 2005 @ 09:57 pm At the end of a tiring day...
Today I got back to work on my project after a long and grueling break. This weekend I worked a six hour shift on Saturday then babysat until midnight that night, only to wake up and work Sunday for another six hour shift. I don't mean to complain, but I'm still rather exhausted.

Today, I worked again, but after ward, I got to work on my website. I didn't add any new pages, but I enchanced the ones I already had. I also took my prologue to work with me so I could edit it and make it just how I wanted everyone to see it. I'm still debating whether not I'll include a pivotal hint in the prologue sections. On one hand, I don't want to overwhelm people as there's already a lot of inofrmation in the piece. At the same time, it would be nice to make mention of it so that when it re-emerges later it's not so unfamiliar. By the time I figure it out, I'll be very done with this entry.

I'm off to go brainstorm and see if I can (I really want to) send out my email tongight.

Oh, and another fun tidbit... when I logged onto my family's portal, the headline on the news page was, "Kneomir: Michelle's fantasy novel project." I consider my day officially made.
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Apr. 6th, 2005 @ 10:27 pm ExHAUSTed
Today, from the time I got home until tonight, when I'm making this entry right now, I have been at my computer working busily to take full advantage of the internet. How do I mean this? Most of you reading this probably already know, but I set up a mailing list for Kneomir. I'm using it to keep some of my closest friends and family members (and mentors) in the loop about Kneomir. I've also been building my site up tremendously, and can proudly say that I'm almost done with it... for now. I plan to keep revising it and making it more and more appealing. As of right now, not many people have stopped to take a discerning look at the site. Through various improvements, over time, I hope to build interest, just like I will with my book. Maybe my hopes are too high, but I really feel like I'm beginning to get my feet off the ground.

::sigh:: I <3 WISE
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Apr. 5th, 2005 @ 09:29 pm A good website day
Today I sat in on an interview with a potential student for next year. The interviewee was really enthusiastic and seemed excited about the program. This made me happy, because I hate to see people get involved in something they have no true conception of. Afterward, I got some really nice advice and encouragement from Coach Love, who boosted my confidence, as usual.

When I got home, I was compelled to work on Kneomir, but didn't have the patience to actually write. Instead, I worked on my Kneomir website. I added about four new pages to my site and worked on some that were already there. I devised a naming system for the characters in my book, to give myself a bit of a science for it. Who knows... maybe one day I'll have devised the whole language.

I was really, really proud of myself for having done all this. I'm learning so much about my book and myself as I go along with this project. Tomorrow I'll work on some actusl writing, and hopefully reach the end of a chapter (if I'm lucky).

Good night!
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Apr. 4th, 2005 @ 10:08 pm WOWIE!
Okay, I'm really, really excited right now. I just wrote my first combat scene, and it was great! I had so much fun and it came out really well. That put the finishing touched on the chapter. Its a really long chapter, but it only covered two days in the book, or rather, a night and a morning. Wow... I have such a buzz right now... the good kind.

Anyway, aside from this, I didn't do anything for WISE. That's okay, though, because it took me about two hours to write this. I'm so immensely proud of myself. And the cool part is that I don't owe it all that much to R.A. Salvatore or David Eddings, who are the two authors I read to get a little more knowledge about combat writing. That's probably because they write about grandiose battle using ornate weapons and strategic choreography of troops and the such. In my case, I just tumbled, snapped a broom in half and let the guy have it. Resourceful, huh?

Okay, I won't share any more gore, as I'm sure it doesn't interest anyone. In any case, good night!
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Mar. 31st, 2005 @ 09:57 pm Bring out the bulldozers...
Tonight, I had basically the same experience that I had last night; a rather good one. I had to go home early because I've been rather tired, so I regretfully used my WISE time catching up on my sleep. I felt a little guilty, but when I tried to write, I felt my head rolling and bobbing around. Oh well. I managed to make up for it later.

I had to go back to the prom expo to take care of my grad nite stuff, like seating, etc. When I got home, I started writing and haven't stopped since. I'm almost done with my chapter, and even have a little bit of the next one started already. I jsut couldn't help that my ideas were getting ahead of themselves. What I am dreading though is the major renovation project that Kenomir has yet to undergo. A while back, when I started the book, I was a lot less fluid in my writing and I was rather bad at establishing the necessary elements of a fantasy novel (i.e. how do they live day-to-day? how do they get along with other kingdoms? what influence does the court have over religion?) and instead I got all hung up on sticking two characters in a heated and extensive argument that accomplished nothing.

Needless to say, I need to work on this aspect, big time.
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Mar. 30th, 2005 @ 11:30 pm Productivity = Prosperity
Okay, today was really, really fulfilling for me.

Firstly, I knew I would have a busy day because I took my friend home early when she was sick. I think I used my WISE time for something truly beneficial on that note. After school, I took two other friends to the bookstore where we each purchased a copy of the book we're scheduled to teach to our English class.

While I was there, I picked up a book called "A World Lit Only by Fire." It was recommended to me by my cousin who said she really enjoyed it. It's all about Medieval and Renaissance history and, even though it's a novel, depicts the events in very accurate factual detail.

Whe nI got home, I went to prom expo, which was more than an ounce of chaos, but everything turned out well. When everyone went to bed and I felt sufficiently alone (and therefore best inclined to produce thoughtful, uninterrupted material) I added a good 500-600 words on to chapter nine of Kneomir. I like whe nI have good nights like this, but I also dislike that I'm having a hard time knowing where I'm going with this book. I'm going to work on figuring that out.
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Mar. 29th, 2005 @ 10:47 pm A disappointing day
Well, tonight I had to work so I didn't get around to doing much WISE stuff. However, I did devise a new way of breaking up and keeping track of my progress within my book. I think I'm going to go by wordcount instead of keeping track of how many chapters I write. This way, I won't necessarily feel so bad when I don't finish a chapter but instead will feel rewarded when I spend time in editing.

I gues on that note I'm going to wrap up thins entry. I haven't really got much to say, but I promise I'll make up for it tomorrow.
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Mar. 28th, 2005 @ 11:05 pm Back from Spring break.... and what've I got to show for it?
Current Music: Cantiga- "Spooky Medley"
Well, Spring BReak was really exciting, over all. I went to the Tampa RenFest, as planned, and got to see Cantiga one last time. I just realized that this past Saturday was the first one on which I didn't see Cantiga, in five weeks. Wow, that's actually very saddening.

Oh well, life goes on. And so does WISE! I've been working overtime on Kneomir. Maybe it's the realization that the year's coming to an end and I haven't accomplished nearly as much as I would have like to, but I've had lots of strong urges to write lately. I'm upping my goal to a chapter a week. That way, I can at LEAST make it to chapter sixteen by presentation time. That's where I left off on my origianl draft, back in eleventh grade, so let's see if I'm up to surpassing my previous accomplishments.

The website is also coming along slowly but surely. I've been adding to it every so often. The whole project is coming along rather slowly, but I'm still satiisfied.

I guess it's not too late to finish up where I was working yesterday. See you later.
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Mar. 14th, 2005 @ 10:11 pm Finally, some progress!
Well, in relation to my past few days, or maybe weeks, I made some serious progress on my project today. Firstly, when I got home from school, I sat down and wrote some stuff for my website. Then, I went and updated it, such that I made a whole new page and changed the layout for the ones I already had. I wrote about another one of the kingdoms and even got to know it a little better myself in the process. It was nice to be making progress again. It's a really good feeling.

As far as future plans go, it's been officialized that my friend and I are going to the Tampa Renaissance Faire over the first weekend of Spring Break. I don't know how I'm going to afford that, but I'll manage somehow. It's going to be so much fun to see Cantiga again, and to spend even more time at a RenFaire than one person should be allowed to.

I guess that's really all I had to say. Considering that I spent a lot of time on a single endeavor, that's pretty much the extent of my accomplishments for the day. I'd better get to bed since I have to get up early and all. Nitey nite!
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Mar. 13th, 2005 @ 08:48 pm The last day of RenFest...
Today, as you could probably tell by the subject of this entry, was the last day of the Renaissance Festival for the year. I got to go as a patron and enjoy all the festivities of the event. I saw Cantiga for what they thought would be the last time. Little do they know that I'll be heading over to Tampa just to see them... yea! I got a lot of ideas from Kneomir, after I watched solme of the shows, like the Pubsing and et cetra. I also learned some more history behind Cantiga's music, which was really neat.

After the festival, my parents and I had dinner at my friend Tim's house so that our parents could get to know each other before officializing anything regarding Tampa. It was a fun experience, but not entirely or even remotely pertinent to WISE.

On that note, I am very wearily off to bed. More tomorrow!
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Mar. 11th, 2005 @ 03:29 pm Busy day
All right... I don't have much time to write in here so I'll have to be really quick. I've gotta be at work in an hour and I have not managed to do a thing for my project today. During my scheduled WISE time for the day, I tried to sit down and write but ended up just taking a nap. I've been really overwhelmed with homework and lack of sleep so I didn't have much of a choice.

I had my enotr meeting today and Mr. Pressey was rather disappointed in me. He understood how busy I've been, but he's just as upset as I am that I haven't gotten more done this week. We're both sincerely hoping that over the coming week and spring break I can manage to make up for what I haven't accomplished. We'll see how that goes.

I also went around for my second set of WISE presentations today. It wasn't as nerve-wracking as the first time which made me very pleased. And, unlike the first time as well, I got a lot of feedback from the students.

Other than that, there are no new updates for the moment. Seacrest out.
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Mar. 10th, 2005 @ 11:38 pm Another day of nonsense
Today, as expected I was bombarded with homework. However, what I didn't expect was that I'd be the busiest I've been all school year with homework today. I had to rush home during my WISE time and get something done for the Literary magazine, then rush back to school and take the stuff to the meeting. Then, when I finally thought I could sit down and relax, I realized I had an extensive comic book assignment due for my creative writing class tomorrow. About five hours after I started, I had finally finished my half of the assignment (taking ssnapshots and arranging them for the story), and proceeded to email them to my freind who would take care of the text. I missed the variety show, in which my boyfriend performed. Though it sounds petty and stupid, it would have really been nice to see him and his band. Instead, though, I just sat home and tackled my math anf English work, until I arraived at now.

Time to slow down and exhale.
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Mar. 9th, 2005 @ 09:55 pm Yucky day
Today I had to go to work from 6:00 until about 9:00, which was just plain no fun. When I got home, I had to finish and English project that's due tomorrow. The sad part is that I didn't procrastinate on this one, I just plain didn't know what to do until I could actually get someone to sit down and talk to me about it. However, when I was at work, between customers I got a couple of minutes to scribble down some stuff for Kneomir. It was really nice to exercise my fingers and my brain again in an area that's beginning to seem so alien to me. I miss working on my book tremendously. Thank goodness for RenFest because, were it not for my volunteering there, I would be making absolutely no WISE progress.

Sorry to be brief, but I'm dreadfully tired.
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Mar. 8th, 2005 @ 10:05 pm Might be picking up...
Today was a little better than yseterday, but not by much. When I came home from Interact, which was at about 4:00, I sat down with Kneomir and contemplated where I'll be taking the next chapter. Okay, here's the sad part: I didn't get anything written for it. However, the fact that I actually had time to sit down and think about it shows that I might possibly have a chance of making some headway this week. I think if I can get my bearings in order, I could potentially do really well.

But this entry isn't about the future... it's about today. And today I regretfully did very little. I was supposed to go on more WISE visits to junior classes, but I just couldn't stomach it after my disastrous failure yesterday. I know I missed out on some nice extra credit points, but, hey, what can I do?

::sigh:: I'm embarrassed to say that I'm alreay ready to go to bed. Considering that there's no WISE news in the world of Norastinia or even in the world of Michelle, I think I might just do that.
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Mar. 7th, 2005 @ 11:12 pm A long day
Today was rather long and pretty uneventful, but I thought I should document it anyway. I spent fourth hour in Mrs. Selvidge's room and did a presentation in Mrs. Farbiarz's room to recruit future students to the program. After school, I had an Interact function so I didn't get home until rather late. After that, I had to go to work, and hardly had enough time to do my homoework. I wish that I could have done more for WISE, but unfortunately, time did not permit today. Hopefully tomorrow will be much more constructive.
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Mar. 5th, 2005 @ 06:15 pm The best day (without question)
Today being Saturday, I went to the Renaissance Festival again, but today was unlike any other. When I arrived, I was assigned front gate duty again, which made me very happy. The people there are very nice and easy to get along with, and the job itself is very fun. I took my break around 12:30 because that was the time the Cantiga show was scheduled to start. Sacrificing complimentary pizza and comfort in the shaded yet breezy volunteer pavilion, I spent my half hour watching their set, which succeeded in being different from all the other ones I've heard. It was truly amazing.

Now, here's the truly extraordinary part. When they were done (and I didn't have much more time left) I approached the flutist and asked if I could sit down with them at the end of their last set and talk to them about their music and the history behind it, etc. He seemed almost flattered and was very willing to do so.

When my shift was over (or rather, I forced it to be because it was nearing 3:30), I hopped over to Harmmony Glen (the stage where they were performing) and saw three of my friends who had come as patrons. The four of us sat in the first row and soaked in the entire half hour set, being completely immersed in it. I was absolutely delighted to see them all enjoying it so much, because this group has come to mean so much to me.

After the show, one of my frinds bought a Cantiga CD and then I bid them farewell; I had important business to handle (yea!). Then, the flutist led be to the back of the tent where the other members of the group were taking apart/tending to their instruments, so it was very much like being backstage. They greeted me very warmly--Bob, the flutist; Martha, the harpist; "Charry," the player of various South American instruments; and Michelle the violinist--and readily answered my questions. I asked them about the style of music they play, its influence on history and how they got together, etc. You can see more about it on my annotation. Anyway, to be short because I'm off to go somewhere, It was the most wonderful experience I've had in WISE so far. To meet one of my favorite bands and be greeted so warmly and with such appreciation AND have it pertain to school was utterly indescirbable.

::sigh:: I'm off to go call everyone I know and tell them all about it.
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Mar. 3rd, 2005 @ 06:50 pm Character Development
Today I wrote an off-the-wall blurb for Kneomir about one of my characters. She was, until today, not yet a part of the sotry because she is supposed to be featured later in the tale. However, I was compelled to write her intriductory sequence today, because I saw it clearly in my mind. It didn't seem to come out quite the way I envisioned it, but once I was done, I had a really good idea of who this woman is intended to be. Then , I went ahead and redid the tense and narration of the passage so as to be able to place it accurately within the story. From what I estimate, I guess I could have easily said, "I worked on chapter twelve today," but then you wouldn't have gotten the inside story, now would you have?

I also did a little more planning for my website. Today I thought up a little layout for which pages I want to place where, and what I want to put on them. It's sort of turning out like a little mini guidebook to Kneomir, and I must admit that I'm very pleased.

That's all for now... more later
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Mar. 2nd, 2005 @ 07:37 pm Back from a long weekend
Monday and Tuesday of this week were very constructive for me. Because FCATs were taking place (and for other various reasons) I had plenty of time to myself to work on Kneomir. I've been adding to it gradually, bit by bit, as I decide the different devices and events that I want to include and how I want them to fall into place. Aside from that, there hasn't been much WISE stuff going on. Today I ran some household errands, and the such, but that's not important.

What IS important to me is how great I've been feeling about this project. I'm so excited about getting to the presentation, even though I won't be even close to finishing Kneomir. I want to carry it with my into college though becasue I'd like to incorprate some of the Medieval knowledge I'll acquire there into its pages.

As a fun little side note, I turned the Kneomir race into a playable character race in Dungeons and Dragons. Sounds goofy, but it killed time at work, and helped me elaborate on the species itself. I decided that there should be two different kinds of Kneomir people, (to be blunt) the wild and the civilized. I'm working on incorporating elements of these two sub-races into the book because they will juxtapose one another and emphasize the conflict within the protagonist who cannot decide to which half he truly belongs.

Yeah, I know... yammer, yammer, yammer.
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Mar. 1st, 2005 @ 09:50 pm FCAT day 2
Today I stayed home again, but not without my reasons. The company that we'd had for about two weeks was to leave early Wednesday and I probably would have missed school even if there were no FCATs just to spend some extra time with him. While he was out running some quick last-minute errands, I stopped by the mall (twice after forgetting to bring my ATM card) to buy a computer game that came out that day. Okay, I'll admit, that was HIGHLY off-task, but what more can I say? It's not as though I didn't pre-order the game ten months before it came out. And that night, when I went to work, I wrote a humorous little Kneomir blurb. It's more developmental than chronology related because it conveys a turn in the way my two protagonists (yes, I have two, is that so wrong?) act toward each other. Afterward, I caught a mysterious whiff of the Renaissance Festival and hungered for a turkey leg... inexplicable perhaps... but perhaps just a product of WISE being permanently ingrained in my mind. Yea!
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Feb. 28th, 2005 @ 07:10 pm FCAT day 1
Today I stayed home from school and spent some time at home doing various chores. Later in the afternoon, before I had to go in to work, I went over to my friend's house where he and I brainstormed some Dungeons and Dragons ideas. The party that we've been playing with (ourselves included) are becoming rather bored with the campaign setting that we've been using since day one. While I was there, he and I worked on transforming Norastinis (the world of Kneomir) into a playable campaign setting. We reconfigured sodme mountain rages, expanded a forest or two and made outlines of each kingdom's history, cultures and politics. I thought this could be indirectly related to WISE because it involves my book to a great degree. It was quite an honor to have someone practically interview me azbout my own imaginary world, so that he would "stay true to my vision" when working on it.
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Feb. 27th, 2005 @ 09:38 am Belated but awesome!
Well, a lot has happened since my last entry, but I will try to fill you in as well as I can.

Friday, when I came home from school, I sat down with my music and wrote about another page to my prologue. I would have gotten much farther were I not so stuck on one character. I decided to stretch the prologue back to a time period with which I'm not that familiar and thus I had to develop the mother of one character. Throughout all that I've wriitten, the mother's been dead so I've had no need to get to know her. Now, it's a little hard to just force her to come out correctly.

Yesterday I went to RenFest again and had SUCH an amazing time! I was placed at the front gate, where I spent half my time stuffing programs and the other half prancing through the ticket lines begging (in my phony "British" accent) "Milord and lady, would you fancy a program?" Eh, what can I say? It was fun.

Then, when I went on my break, I got to go see a show, so I chose Cantiga. I was delighted to find out that they were still there and will continue to be for the rest of the weekends. I talked to the harpist and she said that they'd be willing to talk to me a little bit more next weekend about Medieval and Renaissance music and the such, but at that time, I had caught them while getting ready for the next set. I bought a second CD and the flutist who sold it to me remembered not only who I was but which CD I had bought last week. Yea!

On a slightly unrelated note, I went to my D&D friend's house last night, but we didn't play since much of the group has turned catty, vicious and just plain ADD. Anyway, I got everybody hooked on Cantiga, and we drove around blasting it in my car. It's rather ridiculous to rock out to harps and fifes, but it was fun anyway. When we got to his house, we decided that we need a new campaign setting for D&D because we're all sick of the old one. Therefore, the responsibility was placed on me to come home and devise a detailed layout of Norastine ploitics, cultures and geography so that we can play in Norastinia. Truly, it was an honor that anyone would think so highly of my imaginary little world, but little by little it's becoming so real.

Okay, done ranting now. Maybe I'll come back later to do it again!
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Feb. 24th, 2005 @ 10:14 pm Grr...
Okay... It's weird how LiveJournal keeps doing that read-only thing. I couldn't even make an entry last night because of it. But I guess that's my own problem, eh?

Yesterday I started building a website dedicated to Kneomir. It answers all of the usual questions that I get regarding the book, like what it's about and how I came up with it and the such. At least, these are the kinds of things it'll say when it's finished. For now, it's still a work-in-progress. I'm in the process of finding pictures and typing up all the information.

On the subject of pictures, I talked to a girl in my Creative Writing class today about doing some artwork for my book. Supposedly she's really good and enjoys drawing for other people. I'm considering having her draw some of my settings and characters, which I would use on my website and in my WISE presentation.

As far as Kneomir goes, I didn't get very much done today. I did, however, use one of my two game building programs to begin constructing Norastinia. I'm thinking of using this as a tool to illustrate the landscape, and the verry essence of what my fantastical world is. Plus, it won't be copyright infringement to actually build my own world as opposed to taking pictures of the one built by the software company.

It's late. Good night, everybody.
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Feb. 23rd, 2005 @ 03:17 pm Such a happy individual
I'm SO excited that LiveJournal's being my friend today! Well, anyway, yesterday I did really well WISE-wise... teehee.

I had a team meeting yesaterday, which was a lot of fun. I always like hearing about how other people are doing on their projects, not to mention WHAT they're doing. While I wish I was more modest, I have to admit that I kind of like bragging about my project to people who, I assume, are at least somewhat interested. I'm so pshyched about the mid-term. I know, I know, it sounds ridiculous, but I'm so anxious to lay all my plans for my final presentation on paper. Even though I'm nowhere near done, it's so exciting to think of how far I've come and how proud I am of my WISE project, silly as some people think it may be.

Why do I say silly? Well, you (whoever might be reading this) would be surprised at how many people find my aspirations to be quite unrealistic. Just yesterday I had someone ask "What would you ever do with a Medieval/Renaissance major?" and then proceed to scoff at the idea. If nothing else (which there IS plenty) the WISE experience so far has taught me that I can apply what I love to nearly anything. Anywhere I go anymore I feel inspired to write, by some unseen force. I've learned of individuals who've pursued obscure areas of study like mine and are being interviewed regularly by the Discovery Channel as renown historians, curators, and professors. So there! :P

More to the point of things, I wrote about a page and a half of my new prologue yesterday, which I was very surprised to have done. It felt like I was really taking it painstakingly line by line, but before I knew it, I had pumped out almost 1,000 words. It may have been my new favorite CD that inspired me so much. When I went to RenFest Monday, I picked up a CD by a Renaissance Festival band called Cantiga. There's a lot of history behind their songs, which are mostly from Medieval Spanish cultures. I really love the sounds of the authentic insturments they use. When I saw them I casually assumed that they were just another part of the Festival. Much to my dismay, I looked on their website and saw that they were only there for one weekend and are now touring at other Festivals around the country. I wish I had been able to talk to them about the mechanics and influence of music in Renaissance history. It would have eased me into including some bards or other entertainers in one of Norastinia's many pubs. Yes, I say many because there ARE many. What can I say? These are hard times for any self-respecting Nora man.

Tonight, I'm going to work on taking screenshots from one of my games and building a website to help you all understand a little more about Kneomir. Hmm... what a cool idea. I'm going to go do that now. This time, I think the world-famous webmaster Coach Love was my inspiration.
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Feb. 21st, 2005 @ 09:50 pm OH MY GEEEEZ!
Wow... I've been trying to update my Livejournal for several days but I keep getting the "Livejournal.com is in read-only mode... please try later" message. Maybe it's just me checking at the wrong times. But, regardless, I'm here now, aren't I?

Well, I had QUITE the weekend, if I do say so myself. On Friday I got my dress in the mail and on Satruday, I volunteered at RenFest! It was such an incredible experience. I got to meet all of the other volunteers and mingle with some of the workers. Also, I got a lot of compliments on my dress from the patrons. One observation I made was that I was one of the most authentically dressed people there. The other volunteers were wearing spandex outfits or brightly colored corsets or various kinds of anachronistic fashions. I was rather upset that I went to all the trouble to find an outfit in neutral (therefore appropriate) colors, made from all natural materials, just like they'd specified, when I could just as easily have thrown something together at Hot Topic. At the same time, I was proud to be the only person smart enough to know the difference between being authentic and "getting the look right."

The most amazing thing about the RenFest was the whole aspect of being there. Even though I was there for the setting-up stages, and I knew that it was all wood and spray paint, I had the mindset that I was actually within the boundaries of a fantastical town. In fact, I observed a lot of the aspects of the miniature village and related them to the world within Kneomir (Norastinia). My favorite part was one of the fairies who looked EXACTLY like the mental image that I had formed of one of my characters. Without seeming like a creepy stalker and without getting too off-task, I watched the female fairy character to comprehend the accent and mannerisms she adopted. It may seem strage, but seeing the human manifestion (or what appears to be such) of one of the characters you imagined and have fleshed out over two years is nothing short of surreal.

Guess that's all for now. Fare thee well 'til the morrow!
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Feb. 18th, 2005 @ 09:57 am Yea!
Well, a lot has happened in the past few days, and unfortunately LiveJournal has been down (or at least in read-only mode). I officially purchased my dress for the Renaissance Festival, which I will definitely be attending, and working, this Saturday. I'm so excited for it to arrive, which it should later this afternoon. I'll probably be at work when it gets here. Oh well.

At least when I'm at work I can make myself useful by working more on Kneomir. Yesterday, I had a lot of time to myself and a lot of quiet opportunities throughout the day to work on Kneomir. I guess you could say I made up for all the time I've wasted wondering if I should continue and feeding the obstructions in my inspirtation's path. In other words, I got a lot accomplished. Also, last night, I began a book called The Burning Times, about Medieval France. It talks about the church system of the period and outlines the story of a young girl who is a saint mistaken for a witch and is sentenced to death by the Inquisition. It's all very historically accurate and is giving me a better idea of how old church systems were constructed. I hope to use this knowledge as a better foundation for the Balancial Council (the group of religious leaders in Kneomir who control the "Balance" of the world and are believed to be able to directly communicate with the Holy Dragons of the Balance, which is completely farce).

Wow... what a mouthful. More later!
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Feb. 15th, 2005 @ 09:39 pm Whee!
Well, I was a bad don't-be yesterday--I didn't make an entry because I didn't really do much of anything pertaining to WISE. Today, however, was different, which was very YEA!

After school I sat down and spoke with Karen Doscher, after weeks of trying to schedule a meeting with her. While it wasn't entirely WISE related, she told me all sorts of stories about her experiences at New College. Some of them were about the uniquely liberated academics at the school and others were about student life... the sorts of things I wouldn't share with my parents. :) I got really excited when I spoke to someone who was so enthusiastic about the school. She even told me about a friend of hers who majored in something like Medieval/Renaissance Studies, and spends her days traveling around the world curating, teaching, and refurbishing castles. Is there perhaps a dim light in Michelle's oblique future?

In regards to WISE, I have decided to go to the Renaissance Festival regardless of what my employers think of it. I've spent a good part of the evening online looking for appropriate attire that I could wear when I go to volunteer. With some luck, I'll hear back from the lady on eBay who's selling the dress I want. We'll see how it goes!
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Feb. 11th, 2005 @ 09:38 am I did it! I did it!
Wow! I did it! Did what? IT! I did IT! What is IT? ...Sorry to be anticlimactic, but IT is just the end of chapter nine. I finished it! I'm very excited. We weren't doing anything in class today so I took the time to scribble down the last of "The Unkindness and the Kharul." What's it about? Guess you'll have to read it, huh?

Today's when I'm meeting with Karen Doscher about New College. That's just as exciting as making progress on Kneomir. I'm really looking forward to learning about my school and the such. I just wish that I could use that discussion as the WISE interview for the week, because the only time she was available was after the due date. Sad, but true.

I won't make any further comments about RenFest because I feel I've said enough already. I think I'm holding off until next weekend when it's not so hectic.

Til next time.
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Feb. 11th, 2005 @ 06:37 am Ooops...
Well, yesterday I was rather upset about all the things that happened, so I didn't get to make a fulfilling entry.

This morning, my mom and I decided that I'll probably wait until next weekend to do the RenFest thing.

After I made last night's entry, I didn't feel tired enough to go to bed. Instead, I sat up with Barnabas (my laptop) and we crafted another page or so for chapter nine. I have a feeling Mr. Pressey will be mildly disappointed in me, with not having finished chapter nine and all, but I did (unwillingly) take a leave of absence from it. Now, with a little bit of time provided, I should be able to finish up the last segment of the chapter. Right now, my characters are getting ready for bed. Hopefully by third hour (before my mentor meeting:) ) they will have gotten a full night's rest and be ready for a day of adventure.

They must think I'm crazy, sending them on this suicide mission to the ends of the earth for reasons they don't even know. Hehehe...
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Feb. 10th, 2005 @ 08:08 pm It's a sad, sad day in the neighborhood
I intended for this to be a really good day, and it was turning out to be one, until a while ago.

I got a phone call on Monday from the volunteer coordinator for RenFest... which nobody told me about. Now, I can't get in touch with her.

Also, despite my telling my employers that I couldn't work any Saturday afternoons because of a volunteer position I got (and them insisting that I didn't need to submit it in writing becuase they'd "make a note"), I was scheduled for Saturday morning. Oh, joy.

I haven't gotten a full Renaissance costume yet, which is 70% my fault and 30% Fira's fault. Fira is the Holy Dragon of the Fates, and sometimes his grape-colored self seeks amusement at the expense of mortals.

More later, I hope.
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Feb. 10th, 2005 @ 06:26 am A bright future ahead
Yesterday, I worked in the Box Office from about 6:00 to 9:00. While I was there, I thought I'd do a little writing. Before I knew it, I had scribbled down about six pages in my notebook (which equates to about two) and was inching closer and closer to really exciting part in my story. I was glad because I'd finally regained my interest in Kneomir after so longer a period of disinterest, at which point I'd stunted its growth.

Also, I spoke to Karen Doscher yesaterday, who is the Service Unit Coordinator for the local Girl Sout troops. Though this is somewhat unrelated wo WISE, we arranged a meeting for Friday afternoon at 1:30 so that we could talk about college. It turns out that she is actually a New College alum, and is as eager to tell me all about the school as I am to hear it. I guess that, because my intended major is only (well, almost only) available at New College and is indirectly related to my WISE project, the two are somewhat connected.

Another thing about New College that was one of the eciding factors for me, is that if students are interested in coursework that is not offered, they can collaborate with teachers to create their own one-on-one courses. No kidding. Anyway, an example of one of these that was listed in the giganimongous New College brochure was called "Magic Realism." That's a genre kin to High Fantasy, which is what Kneomir is. Guess you really CAN do ANYTHING there!
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Feb. 8th, 2005 @ 08:23 pm Two in one
Between yesterday and today, I got a lot accomplished for WISE.

Yesterday, I approached Coach Love about potentially pursuing two books instead of one, and then comparing them and contrasting them. This would teach me which genre (since they would be very different) I was more proficient in and enjoyed writing more. Although he said that he'd prefer I only do one, since I won't be spread so thinly, he did indicate that a double-project would be perfectly acceptable.

Today I had a lot of interesting events happen to me. While I won't go into detail (since they involve some of my friends and are rather personal) I was exposed to a lot of issues that I'm not usually presented with. I learned a little more about how I handle moral situations and about what it's like to have to make important decisions. This provided a wealth of inspirations and a better understanding of some more legitimate and mature issues about which I'm not used to writing.

I also took my laptop to school since it was FCAT day and we weren't doing much of anything. While I was there, I wrote about a page of Kneomir and typed some blurbs for my other (tentative) project as well. I'm off to go work on either one or the other right about now.
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Feb. 4th, 2005 @ 10:28 am Yesterday...
Yesterday I was home for... ::cough::... sickness reasons. Luckily, I was able to use this time to develop my story a little better. Unfortunately, I will not have much to show as far as chapter progress goes. However, I made several very detailed character outlines that developed the histories of the characters and gave them greater depth. This also helped me get a better glimpse of how their previous actions and life experiences should impact the way they think and behave now.

I also went to Rotary with my Dad (Senior Skip Day WAS constructive!) And bought a copy of Shirah Penn's book.

Considering that I spent about three hours doing this, I feel it was a sufficient endeavor. While I regret not being finished with chapter nine as of yet, I can say that I walked away with a greater understanding of the players in my great literary production. Today is another day.
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Feb. 2nd, 2005 @ 10:03 pm WISE, O WISE
Today was luckily more productive than yesterday. Although I worked today after school, I got a lot of reading done while I was there. I focused on reading fantasy authors whose style I would like to resemble aspects of. For example, I read a book by R.A. Salvatore, who writes specifically for the makers of Dungeons and Dragons, because he writes a lot of combat sequences. Fighting is stylistically one of my weaknesses.

Also, before I left, I added a few paragraphs to chapter nine. It may not sound like much, but they were essential details that I only recently realized were essential.

Since I've been home, I've been exploding with ideas for my non-serious side project that I use simply to keep myself from becoming tired of Kneomir. I noticed that about once a week I get drawn back to this exercise, because it helps to clear the slate and give my mind a break from Norastinia.

I'm off to go develop some new characters, or maybe just revise old ones. See you later.
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Feb. 1st, 2005 @ 10:16 pm A dull day
Unfortunately, I got litle to nothing done in the realm of WISE-age today. Perhaps I was to drained from yesterday, but between and after-school meeting, picking up (and showing off) my new car, and elivering Girl Scout cookies, I didn't find any time to write.

I guess you could say that I did a small part by beginning The Best Little Boy in the World. It's porbably the most popular or well-known of Andrew Tobias' books. I'm pursuing it eagerly so that I can learn a little more about the genius that is Tobias.

Aside from that, it was a devastatingly uneventful day. I have high hopes for tomorrow, however.
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Jan. 31st, 2005 @ 09:30 pm The most extraordinary of extraordinary days...
Wow! Today really blew me away. Not only was I in disbelief of all the progress I made on my project (sadly not on Kneomir), but I got to met some really interesting people and build my research database tremendously.

After school I had an interview with Shirah Penn. She's a fellow Rotarian of my dad's who recently published a children's book. We agreed to meet at Lucille's Cafe this afternoon and conduct an interview. So, at 1:30 we met up and shared sodas and salad and I asked her an assortment of questions that pertained to writing. They were pretty much the same questions I'd been asking everyone else, however, forty minutes later when she refused to let me pick up the check, I realized that we had discussed far more than just that. It was quite a wonderful experience, and I have every intention of purchasing one of her independently published books. She was interviewed on live TV this morning and I was sorry to have missed it. As I see it, I got the inside scoop for myself.

As soon as I got home, my dad called me and said that he had another contact lined up for me. This was sudden and unexpected but I was naturally willing to jump at the chance of meeting someone else. He gave me the name of the individual, Andy Tobias, which I found strikingly familiar. It was then that Daddy said, "He's the guy who wrote all those books I read in bed at night, and on weekend afternoons." Whoa! This was terribly exciting. I checked my email and saw that Mr. Tobias had emailed me (in the form of an adorable little verse poem) saying that my dad had informed him of the nature of WISE and he'd be "honored" to answer my questions. At this point I had to slow down and catch my breath, big time. Once I regained my composure I sent him my usual variety of interview questions, tweaked to fit his particular form of writing.

So, tonight after work, I checked my mail again and found that he had already responded to my questions. His clever and somewhat quirky replies were so fresh and insightful that they provided me with great material to use as research. But aside from that, on a level unrelated to my tangible project, I simply had the unmatched satisfaction of knowing that an author, reviewed by the New york Times, who has successfully published over a dozen books, had taken the time to deliberate my questions, to take a moment of his day to pass his advice and knowledge on to me.

I sigh as the night grows older, realizing that THIS is what this class is all about.
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Jan. 27th, 2005 @ 09:16 am Three in one
Over the last few days, I've spent a lot of time on my new computer, which doesn't have internet, so I did my entries on word documents. I finally got to sit down and enter these today while I'm in school:

"Monday, January 24th

Today I got a chance to discuss my project with my peers. We had our first team meeting (my team and I, that is) in Mrs. Selvidge's room after lunchtime. I got to hear about what some of the other WISE students are doing for their projects and some of them were really interesting. I'm anxious to see the final results of everyone's project, but I'm sure I'll only get to sit in on a few. I shared a little bit about the nature of my project and told everyone who I've interviewed and what research I've done. I got credit for having my stuff in on time (woohoo!) which made me happy. However, it didn't make me quite as happy as my opportunity to share my project with the group.

I showed off the original map that I created, depicting the fantastical world in which Kneomir takes place. My fellow team members seemed rather impressed and a little inquisitive about the subject mater of my book. they asked me such things as "where do you come up with the names for these places?" and, "does this map help you plan out your story?" It was really great to have people so interested in my work.

That's all for now... see you tomorrow."


"Tuesday, January 25th

After school today, I did not accomplish as much as I would have liked. I got home from school and did a small amount of storyboarding (which is not actually in the form of a storyboard but more of an outline, but "outlining" sounds pretty ridiculous) for Kneomir and then proceeded to edit some of my previously written chapters. After a brief period I grew a bit tired and resorted to playing on of my computer games. I guess you could say that it was actually a WISE-related experience, considering that many of Kneomir's environments are based on the unique places detailed in the fantasy game. Without even knowing it, or intending for it to happen, I got a great idea for a new city to add to Kneomir, based off of today's game play.

Realizing that I had done little, I went to 'bed' a little early tonight and caught up on reading my Writer's Guide to Fantasy Literature book. I read a chapter about the different kinds of fantasy and the fundamental elements of each. Judging by the criteria, I think I've got high fantasy covered.

And this time, I'm off to bed for real."


"Wednesday, January 26th

Wow! Today was OUTSTANDINGLY productive. Today, after I got home from school, I sat down with my laptop and found myself incapable of being distracted. There was no gaming and no TV, just my computer and myself. I put on some of my favorite and most inspirational music (the soundtrack to the game I played yesterday) and typed away.

After two hours had passed, I realized I'd written an entire page, a pretty hefty chunk of a chapter. Now, understand, a page may not sound like much, but if I could write a page a day, I would only have been working on this for two months (it's been almost two years). I have to say I was terribly impressed with myself, especially because the piece I wrote was something I was intending to put off for a couple of million years into the story, but realized had now become crucial. The exercise I did today showed me that I don't necessarily have to reach a part of my story in order to write it. I just have to feel it, and feel it I did.

Later in the evening my mom was at a meeting and so I had the house to myself--an ideal time to write. Alas, I found that my word reserves were exhausted for the day. Hopefully they'll be recharged by 1:00 this afternoon, and whether they are or not, I'll be sure to let you know!"

Tonight I work, but I'll make my evening entry when I get back.
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Jan. 21st, 2005 @ 09:48 pm Portable Entry
This entry is the first that I am making on my laptop, because I managed to pick up some kind of wireless signal on it. Today I completely finished chapter eight of my book. I managed to finish editing most of it and printed a finalized copy. Right now, I'm playing D&D at my friend's house. Earlier, when I got here, I shared parts of my book with them and got some opinions from seasoned fantasy readers.

This morning, I had my second mentor meeting and it was extremely productive. I informed my mentor of the nature and got his advice on pacing techniques for pacing myself.

Tomorrow is my training for the Renaissance Festival. Hopefully I'll get a good idea of what I'll be doing and be able to find a dress by the 12th.

That's all for now... good night!
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Jan. 21st, 2005 @ 06:34 am The Last of the Week
With my computer all configured and ready for use last night, I sat outside on my porch and composed about a page or so of chapter eight. I tried to tweak the dialog I'd already written so that I could express more in a little and cut down on the bland omniscient descriptions. I think it's about time I learned to let go a little and let my characters speak for themselves.

I also tied up some loose ends on my bibliography and completed my weekly homework last night. I can only hope that everything went through okay.

Tomorrow, I will be attending Quiet Waters Park with my mother. From 1-5 in the afternoon they will be conducting Renaissance Festival volunteer training. This time won't be connected to WISE per se since it's on a weekend, but it directly correlates to the experience that I hope will be useful in m project.

That's all for now!
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Jan. 20th, 2005 @ 09:30 pm Making up for lost time
I would that this entry could count for today and yesterday, but since it can't, I'll just do yesterday's today and today's tomorrow. Why can't I just do things the RIGHT way?

Well yesterday I arrived home and was very, very pleased to receive my new laptop! (not that I ever had an old one) I spent the evening toying with it, which took away from a lot of the time that I could have used to be productive. However, I did manage to pump out a good page or so around 10:00. I worked briefly on one of my old stories just to get a break from the primitive, funny-speaking, candlelit world of Norastinia. For those of you who don't know, Norastinia is the fictitious world in which Kneomir takes place.

I also sat down with some books last night. I finished part 2 of Garry Disher's Writing Fiction: an Introduction to the Craft, and got a little further into A Writer's Guide to Fantasy Literature. Thought the two seem similar in that they're both books about writing, they're almost polar opposites. I use one to help me create fantastical stories and craft mystical characters and realms, while the other one helps me to bring realism to them and tie them neatly together.

That's all for now. Yesterday was a slow WISE day. Maybe today was more productive, maybe it wasn't! Will I ever tell?
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Jan. 18th, 2005 @ 10:54 pm Back from the weekend...
Today was a trying yet thought-provoking day for my little novel project.

I sat down with Dr. Marshall from Cypress Bay and asked him some questions about the writing process and being a writer, as well as what it takes to get published. I thought he'd be a great person to interview because he's recently published a novel called "The Sideways Dance of Blue Crabs" (and if that's mistaken, I'm terribly sorry). Anyway, I was planning to save my interview with him for later on since I'd already lined one up with my former editor, but I haven't received a reply from her yet and so I jumped a bit ahead of myself. And now, I'm glad I did.

Dr. Marshall had some rather intriguing things to say that I've read in some of my writer's advice guides and the such, but were not really registering until I heard them from him. He explained that the essence of writing is within the writer, it's something that he or she does to teach or express him or herself. Then he added, poignantly, that, if you're writing simply to get published, don't write. It was then that it occurred to me that he was exactly right. I'm beginning to learn, from scheduling myself and adhering to a strict plan that forcing the writing to come out of me just doesn't work. I don't enjoy setting an objective such as "finish chapter 8 revisions by Monday," (which was the goal that I didn't meet this weekend) but instead scribbling the ideas that are sparked by the most miniscule evnts of the day and chaining the random bits into some great sequence of untapped, raw thought. Perhaps I'm beginning to sound a bit obscure, but these are simply my personal views.

So, taking this notion by my side like a suitcase I carried it with me to my home and work. I spent a good half an hour jotting down notes between customers about what I was seeing and thinking, on literal and figurative levels. This was a refreshing exercise for me because I've always been told to pick a project and stick with it until it's done. For that reason, I usually grow tired of my stories and abandon them for others, too worn out to ever go back. Needless to say, I've never finished a book.

Today I took a breather into the realm of realistic fiction, but tomorrow when I revert to my routine, I guess we'll find out if Kenomir has jealousy issues.
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Jan. 14th, 2005 @ 06:30 am Earlybird Entry
Becase I was up into the wee hours of the morning doing homework and I like to make my entries at the END of the night to be sure I include eveyerthing, I'm doing yesterday's today. :)

Deborah O'Connor got back in touch with me and said she'd contemplate my questions over the weekend and conteact me about meeting in person (maybe that'll be one day when I don't have to circle "H" again on my sign-out sheet!) On the same note, I'm going to email Neil Gaiman (my favorite author of such works as Coraline, Neverwhere and the Sandman graphic novel series) many of the same questions. Some of them are already answered on his FAQ so i want to increase the likelihood of him getting back to me. I'll probably do it tonight since he might be more likely to respond to mail on weekends. I hope, hope, hope I can get through to him!

Yesterday, I also took a drive down by Weston Books in search of contact numbers and book-signing dates of local authors. Unfortunately, I was saddened to find the little store empty with a "Lease" sign in the window. Oh well. Guess it just wasn't working in Weston.

Within the next day or two I should be receving a response from the Renaissance Festival regarding the volunteer applicaton they sent me and I completed yesterday. In the mean time, I'm been practicing my Elizabethan pronunciation and probing eBay for authentic-looking dresses.

No news on Kneomir, right now. Sometimes I just have to come up for air. I'm beginning to see that writing too frequently is just as bad as writing too infrequently, becasue it's easy to tire of a concept or story.

See you again this evening!
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Jan. 12th, 2005 @ 10:26 pm Hurray for a good day...
Today was probably the most produtive day I've had so far. My novel and I were connecting on an intimate level and I was able to successfully complete the revision of chapter one. One chapter may not sound like much, but I feel that knocking 3,500 words of garbage down to 2,500 well-organized literary components is quite an accomplishment.

Also, I just got done emailing my interview questions to Deborah O'Connor, who I mentioned yesterday as being the editor of The Source, a local business magazine. If you get a spare minute, you should check it out (www.sourceforbusiness.com). It's a rather impressive publication.

Aside from that, I also just got done emailing the volunteer coordinators for the Renaissance Festival. With their reply, I will hopefully be able to know whether or not I will snag a position at this year's event.

Tomorrow after school, I plan to drop by Weston Books in hopes of discovering some local authors. I know that that store is best-known for promoting little-known local writers, so I hope that I will be able to acquire some contacts in that visit.

On a somewhat unrelated note, my dad and I looked at laptops tonight online. My hopes are that I will be able to find one soon so that I can carry Kneomir with me wherever I go on the most efficient of mediums.

For now, I'm off to bed, or at least to claim I'm going to bed but really spend another couple of hours tweaking my novel.
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Jan. 12th, 2005 @ 09:00 am Belated Entry
Unfortunately, yesterday, there were some problems with my home computer and I did not have access to any others. For this reason, I wrote my journal entry by hand and will post it now:

"Today, I went to visit my Mom at the bank where she works since it was my first day getting off school early. While I was there, I found out that her bank is a co-sponsor of the Renaissance Festival. I used this to get a connection to the volunteer coordinators of the event, which will hopefully earn me a desirable spot. (Yea!)

When I went home, I emailed the editor of a magazine I used to write for, so that I could interview her about the writing and editing process. Later on, she returned my message saying she'd be glad to participate. Tomorrow I will email my questions to her and she'll decide whether or not she wants to meet in person or conduct the interview over the phone.

I also had to go to work this evening, but that was perhaps the most productive part of my evening. Since I work in the Box Office of the Weston Movie Theatre, there's nothing to do but sell tickets and work on my book between movie times. I composed a brief introduction for my first chapter, and began to edit what of the chapter I'd already written. I'm trying to go for something a little more concise than what I have, considering that it's a complicated, lengthy story. Also, it wouldn't hurt to try and finish before May if I can avoid sacrificing quality for quantity.

That's all for now. See you tomorrow!"

Tonight, I'll be making today's entry.
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Jan. 10th, 2005 @ 05:42 pm The First Official Day
Greetings and salutations!

Today was the first day back to school from winter break, so I guess this can count as my first entry. This morning in my Creative Writing class we did an exercise that allowed us to explore the character-driven types of stories. We had to describe the character in great detail, and put him or her in various situations. I took this opportunity to fine-tune one of the most crucial characters in my novel and am currently brainstorming ways to enhance her place in the story.

Since the plans I had for the night fell through, I intend to spend at least an extra hour revising some of the earlier chapters. It has been six months since I actively worked on my book and have distanced greatly from it. Also, my writing abilities have approved in that span of time, so I hope to edit out much of my convoluted blabber.

I found a section in the weekend Showtime section of the Sun Sentinel that reviews upcoming books and lists the dates of local book signings by big-name authors. Tonight, I intend to look for an event or two that is relatively close to home and of at least mild interest to me. This way, I might have heightened chances of meting a published author outside the idiom of Cypress Bay and gaining some perspective.

That's all for now. I'm off to go give my characters some much-needed makeovers.
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Jan. 9th, 2005 @ 11:37 pm The Big First!
Hello Everybody! I was about to get started with my first WISE journal entry about two hours ago, when it occurred to me that I could very well just post it online. I thought that on a medium such as this, it would be more convenient and more accessible to everyone.

On a different note, I didn't do much that pertained to my WISE project today. For starters, I just cleaned out my old folders and notebooks from last semester, and created a WISE file, which I will being using tomorrow. Over the past several weeks, I've collected all the notes and accessories (for lack of a better word) that accompany my book and rounded them up into one HUGE folder. I've been brainstorming a lot and have made some signifcant progress on the editing my book over break. When properly formatted into the size and alignment of a normal book, it's already 120 pages! Tomorrow, I know I'll have to start buckling down and working on my book every chance I get.

Today I also got the phone number of someone who's partially in charge of the Florida Renaissance Festival. Some day this week, I intend to call her and find out more about volunteering for my project.

In the mean time, though, I think I'll stop tweaking the aesthetics of this journal and start getting ready for school tomorrow.
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